Joey Bane Joins The Ranks

[joeybane]

After a commercial break, every screen turns black. After some seconds the city of Palermo appears in a aerial view. Then the camera pans to a mansion. The Bane's Family Mansion.
And then a voice starts speaking.

Unknown Voice: where all the business of the city are taken care of. The Godfather Bane lives here with his son, Joey Bane. But "The Demon" Joey live is not the business of the father, instead he turned out a good wrestler in Palermo.

Images of a kid with 22 years old appears. He delivers many punches and kicks. And in the end of the clip is showed a move that is so devastating and almost illegal. That is the famous "Offer He Can't Refuse" a head crushing move. Joey learned that move when he was taking care of family business.

Unknown Voice: As you all can see Joey Bane is coming to ICW. And here is the signed contract. Bane is no pushover and he will crush any opponent who stands against him.

And then a shot can be heard. And another voice yells:

HEADSHOT!

Joey Bane appears in the screen with a guy on his knees. Bane smiles at the camera and applies his trademark move "Headshot" to this poor little guy.

Bane: Thanks for watching this little movie. As you all know I'm coming for everyone who stands against me, so beware you so called Champions, I'll take your titles away and finish you off with this little move..

Joey Bane finishes off the little guy with a "Offer He Can't Refuse" and leaves him unconscious on the ground, as Bane leaves the backstage area to the locker rooms.

Voice:This clip will selfdestruct in...10...9...8....7...6...5...4...3...2...1.................

An explosion occurs in the clip and everything goes black.



EoT
Comments please.

[tripp]

it was pretty good
i like the originality
nice work!

[joeybane]

Thank you very much.
But to be honest i thought that it was nothing special. And that was my first Promo in my life

[tripp]

well then its obviously something special!
and if that was your first try i cant wait to see the rest

[joeybane]

well i'm a little rusty since i not RPing for almost an year. But i think i can do just the right thing. Thank you again for the comments.

[tripp]

yeah np!

[mystery]

just as Tripp said, very original and i liked it. I love having people come in here and say they are going to take names and kick some ass while winning titles. It amuses me as there have only been a hand full of people (myself included) that have been able to do it

[joeybane]

lol let's say that my character is the Badass type so i must RP that way. And thanks for the feedback

[mystery]

lollers ya ik how that goes and np anytime you need help throw something into development and we can help you ever more

[joeybane]

i trust my development to the staff. And littler Joey trusts too lol