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Post by mikeavar on Jun 18, 2008 20:41:30 GMT
  Alexander - So what do ya think honey?Chris - It's awesome. You rented this place?Alexander - Nope, bought it.Chris - Why?Alexander - We're going to be starring in a movie.Chris - What!? Really? What movie!?Alexander - It's called Dominion.Chris - CoolAlexander - But first, how about some food. I saw a really good ad for a revolving japanese resturant.Chris - Ooh, Sushi. Chrissi likes. |
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Post by ~Morzan/ Mr. Ace~ on Jun 18, 2008 21:02:18 GMT
OOC: Not bad but a little too short, and kinda meaningless. You should have actually done a little story in which we get to know the characters better. Perhaps actually with your characters going to the restaurant and Guerrero getting into an arguement.
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Post by tripp on Jun 18, 2008 21:04:25 GMT
OOC:
Uhm, what was the point of this..? lol
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Post by mikeavar on Jun 19, 2008 5:14:26 GMT
I'm going to continue it later
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Post by tripp on Jun 19, 2008 6:43:58 GMT
oh, alright
well in that case i cant wait to see the rest of it!
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Post by Darnez FC/Matt Campton on Jun 19, 2008 8:54:11 GMT
lollers
A good start...just do remember to finish it...otherwise...as Tripp said...it doesn't have a point...
The Sushi looks good though
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Post by mystery on Jun 19, 2008 21:15:35 GMT
sushi is nasty as hell and ya i would like to see this continued
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Post by tripp on Jun 20, 2008 5:11:37 GMT
sushi isnt bad you bitch!
lol
but yes
continue this
(only said it to keep in on topic xD
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Post by ~Morzan/ Mr. Ace~ on Jun 20, 2008 6:47:53 GMT
Enough OOC comments, kinda meaningless like the post itself.
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