A Poem by Lachlan.

[grockadoc]

Lachlan is sitting in a dark room, holding a piece of paper.

Lachlan:
Battle of the Titans Has been and went.
Titles changed hands and Paychecks sent.
But in the shadows someone waits
waiting for someone to take the bait.
His soul is evil, full of pain
Got nothing to lose, more to gain
He stalks the shadows for a chance to reap
Anyones Soul for him to keep.
In his heart he secretly hates
someone who used to be a mate.
He watches him carefully, eyes glued
Why does he always have to get booed?
He is sick of them, sick of him
Time to commit the ultimate sin.
By taking his life, he holds an edge
He has given them an oath. A secret pledge
To take out the one who had defeated him
And tear out his heart, and watch his eyes dim.
Because he cannot become almighty
if he lives even slightly.
Vengeance is something he has always longed for
Because when he has it, he wants more and more.
He likes taking lives. He simply adores it.
He has taken them without giving a shit.
But now he has to take one from someone he knows
he will do it, but what emotions will show?
Will he be able to take it from him?
Can he take on a whim?
He is confident in his skills.
He packs away his hammer, nails and Drill
Eager to take a life, a heart and soul
He is about to make a certain head roll.
He knows who he is, he is a marked man
If anyone can do it, Lachlan Can.
He stalks the shadows, showing no fear.
Wait a second, What did he hear.
He turns the corner, sees who is seeking
But the guy turns and walks to the ring.
Lachlan curses, and walks away
Having a chance another day.
He lies in bed
voices screaming in his head
of past victims he has slaughtered.
Mothers, fathers, sons and Daughters.
All killed by his hand.
Always buried by a tonne of Sand.
Darkness comes and doesnt wait
for any man to compensate.
Lachlan hunts Scally in his dreams.
He hunts where nothing is what it seems.
Scally, you better run. Watcha Gonna Do?
Your soul is mine cos im coming for you!

Lachlan laughs and the camera fades.

[grockadoc]

OOC: Scally, i know your feuding with Santiago, its just that, im gonna go into a satge of denial about losing, and keep sending you warnings ETC until we face each other.

[mystery]

it wasn't amazing but it was decent, if you could have made it more hatefull and dark i would have given you a superstar fame point. But it didn't have the right depth that i was hoping it would to it

[tripp]

length.. key issure here
but it was pretty cool
=]

[grockadoc]

i edited it, made it darker, and longer

[Scally/Taylor Rose]

But I am heel now.

[~Morzan/ Mr. Ace~]

Having read it, I think its good enough for a superstar point. You see, poems are very difficult to write. And it takes more effort to write one than it does to write a promo. Although it could have been better as in there was no description prior to the event of the poem but it was good anyway.

Lachlan Smith: +1 Superstar Point
(Good Promo)

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