trapped inside

[Exterminator/Chris Caspian]

The lights dim and start flashing red and blue as the words come up on the titantron you cant beat me even if you try. Fireworks explode on the stage as the music "bigggg traiiiin rooooooooooliiiinnnnnnnnn dooownn the liine makes me lonely sometimes i want to run awwwaaaaayyyyyyy"plays as exterminator appears through the smoke of the fireworks as he walks down the ramp he notices a sign and says to the fan i like that sign as he continues walking down the ramp he starts giving high fives to the fans and says you rock guys he starts running down the ramp and then he slides into the ring climbs the turnbuckle and raises his fists in the air. He calls out to the timekeeper"pass me a microphone" as the timekeeper throws him a microphone he raises the microphone to his lips ready to speak and he then says"id like to be in a kind of match where you are trapped inside can anybody guess.





Fans: cage cage cage cage cage cage cage cage cage




exterminator: fans thats right but what i need to know is who is willing to face me in this deathdifying match i mean who would want to see me versus say the killer in just a normal match no way or would you prefer a maths test no you wouldnt you want a cage but who will come out and accept my offer

[~Morzan/ Mr. Ace~]

Not bad, like the idea but it really needs grammer and punctuation. There are hardly any capital letters, full stops or commas and these are general stuff.