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Post by Chris Carlington on Jul 22, 2008 10:48:18 GMT
(Before the Dark Match on th Card, at World's end)
Carlington walks out onto the stage, microphone in hand. As the crowd notice his arrival, the begin a chorus of boos and jeers.
Carlington: I just wanted to come out here to tell you all-
More booing from the crowd causes Carlington to cut off, waiting for them to calm down.
Carlington: To tell you all, that I come out here every week-
The booing increases in intensity, and volume, causing Carlington to wait again, for a chance to speak.
Carlington: I come out here every week, and put my body on the line, for-
The booing becomes intolerably loud, causing Carlington to lose his cool.
Carlington: DAMMIT!
Chris Carlington throws his microphone out into the crowd, hitting a fan at random on the head, and knocking him out cold. Carlington exits.
EoT
((Comments, criticisms, etc.))
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Post by Darnez FC/Matt Campton on Jul 22, 2008 12:29:05 GMT
WAY too short man...you should've really posted an "entrance" at the beginning...
...also, i would've liked to have seen a giant spaz at the "DAMNIT!" Point...instead of just exiting...
...it seems like i'm being really critical, but its all in helping man
(although it does build up your character somewhat...into what i believe could be a current "Chris Jericho"...)
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Post by Lenny Thompson/Tony Edison on Jul 23, 2008 16:34:58 GMT
I lol'd... That was pretty good. But like Darnez said, it was pretty short and you probably could have put the entrance at the beginning.
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Post by mystery on Jul 23, 2008 16:51:29 GMT
i hope there is a follow up promo to this
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Post by Scally/Taylor Rose on Jul 24, 2008 9:20:24 GMT
There is no need for a follow up promo.
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Post by Chris Carlington on Jul 24, 2008 10:49:29 GMT
Thankyou for the tips, and I do make a follow-up of sorts in my match against Lenny.
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Post by mystery on Jul 24, 2008 21:41:25 GMT
@ AJ: Umm well otherwise this was a un needed promo that unless there is some sort of follow up promo didnt need to be made. NO offence to chirs
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Post by Scally/Taylor Rose on Jul 25, 2008 8:52:18 GMT
Well by follow up I meant like a to be continued one, like Lachlan, sure there is need for more.
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